Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Propositional Article

http://www.staradvertiser.com/news/20100901_Prevedouros_aim_is_stopping_rail.html#axzz0yJT1xjlc

Propositional Statement: I think that what Prevedouro's doing about the rail is right because right now is a bad time to be thinking about the rail, Hawaii has a rough economy, and the rail would make it even worse.
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  1. lsueokaSeptember 11, 2010 at 5:24 PM

    Hi Leo,
    Your proposition is now closer to a single statement of opinion. It should be more direct still: Rail should be stopped.
    mrs s
    revision assessment: 3

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